salam ppl. M apu'r poem gula pore amar khub poem likhte ichcha korche. but sadly, i suck at writing poems. infact when i took creative writing. every fri. i had to write something. anything. and i used to write poems abotu how i cant write poems. anyways, M pu's poems had such a great effect on me that now, i decided to embarass myself by posting one of my own poems here.
ahm ahm ahm..................
Poetry & I
writing a poetry
is not my thing
it is so hard
i'd rather sing
I know nothing
about writing poetry
I guess we just
don't have the chemistry
I try hard
for my poetries to rhyme
but it takes too long
and i just don't have the time
Wow, this poetry rhymes
this is so amazing
I am so happy
I feel like dancing
ok..................lol..............guys, serious, i got a 10/10 for it. lol. hard to believe eh? well, it was creative writing. and my poem has some unique qualities. lol. to unique.
ahm ahm ahm..................
Poetry & I
writing a poetry
is not my thing
it is so hard
i'd rather sing
I know nothing
about writing poetry
I guess we just
don't have the chemistry
I try hard
for my poetries to rhyme
but it takes too long
and i just don't have the time
Wow, this poetry rhymes
this is so amazing
I am so happy
I feel like dancing
ok..................lol..............guys, serious, i got a 10/10 for it. lol. hard to believe eh? well, it was creative writing. and my poem has some unique qualities. lol. to unique.
posted by maya at 6/30/2005 11:29:00 am
14 Comments:
what do you embarrass urself? We're laymen when it comes to poetry ourself. Yours is quite good. Keep at it, it'll get even better. And poems don't havta rhyme, rhyming poems belong to the olden days. Nowadaws, ppl write free verse
Example:
Ode to Job
Job came down
in a
woosh, outstretched
and gliding into the horizon.
Blue shadowed
flight
arrested by
the beckoning marsh.
His greatness bears
much
yet not
the anguish of ancient
prophecy.
Situated grievances weigh
feathery
on this long,
strong back. Unconscious
emotion
numbs while
time drifts out
another
sun salted
day.
btw, I didnt write that, its from here
hm.........i tried to write free verse, but for some reason, I cant make them sound like poems if its free verse. i was trying to write another poem yesterday, but seriously guys, i dont think i can rise above 2nd grade level on writing poems. i should stop kidding myself.
YOU CAN! post your next one soon and we'll see...
so, when can we expect your next poem mou dake. What's the 'dake' bit btw?
Gettin old waiting for your next poem mou!
lol..........yeah....i was trying to write one that day....... couldnt even come up with the first line. lol........
and the mou dake part......well, i remember, b4 i came here, i read this really scary book. the book's name was mou dake. i think i was about 10. and every night i would wake up screaming, calling my mommy. lol. but anyways.......after i took the nick mou, i remembered that book. it doesnt sound that scary anymore.
siiigh, i have no talent nor will neither mind to write poetry. however, i did, once upon a time in 1995, used to write stories. one such story was published in the fiest volume of a magazine that our neighbourhood published. one of my very few achievements in life....
(on a more cheery note)
wanna read it anyone??!!
hey.........i wanna read it........post it. atleast u guys can wrtie stories......i dont have that talent either. lol......i used to write fairy tales when i was about 7 or 8. ekhon tau likhina.
me too me too I wanna read it too...was that a bit too gushing...perhaps moo's infalated head is just about popping!
lolz i like ur poem mou dake even though i dont think i kno u.
hold on, r u frm canberra?
hey :_AnoNymUs_:, i live in USA actually. i am glad you liked my poem, even though its not nearly good as the ones you wrote, they were really good.
thnx # mou dake. dekhte hobeto ke likhse.. lolz
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